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Free Spirit
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PostSubject: a cold day   Fri Aug 28, 2009 9:20 pm

its a cold day
and i cant play.
my sister has a fever
and i've caught a cold.
i don't like cold days
because everyone gets sick
and no one can play.
guess we'll just have to wait another day.

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PostSubject: Re: a cold day   Sat Aug 29, 2009 8:19 am

Thankies much, FS, for putting up your poems again. Smile

Anyways, it was pretty good.
Though you don't always need to rhyme in poems, like I've told you. =P
I liked it.

Reminds me of that day...

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